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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

What stayed with me most was the image of pulling a soul back through darkness and still finding something to hold onto. Beneath all the intensity, I felt a quiet determination to survive. Thank you for sharing something so unguarded.

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

thanks!! comments like yours make me feel braver to share

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

What a beautiful poem, I loved the voiceover too! Well done Lila! ❤️🥰

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

thank you!

<3

The Great Wild Word's avatar

Really nice

Ninjastroni's avatar

"thick honey messages" is such an interesting line in this beautiful poem.

Virginia Curtis's avatar

I love being able to hear your words in your voice. Love, Virg

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

aw thanks virginia!