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B Philippe's avatar

Wow! I am blown away by this powerful piece. Very beautifully done!

“I write about all of my loves,

but you don’t get a poem.” ~ ❤️

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

thank you so much!!

Nick Hills's avatar

I have known that feeling, wonderful poem!

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

thanks, Nick! though i’m sorry you have also felt this.

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Powerful words. I think poetry is a great way at getting these sort of things out and you've turned it into a great piece, too.

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

thank you very much !

crim's avatar

i love this. i've heard people say when you write poems about someone you're basically eternalizing them, they'll always live somewhere after they die. i guess i never realized anger is like that, too.

very eye opening, i enjoyed it very much

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

thanks for reading <3

i like that idea, i feel like the message is out there, i got it out of my system and i didn’t have to confront a problematic person

Echoes unmade's avatar

I felt every word of this.

Powerful 🖤

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

thank you! <3

Ethereal Twilight Poetry's avatar

I love everything about this and your voiceover is gorgeous 😭♥️

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

you’re so kinddd 😭thank you, that means a lot <3

Virginia Curtis's avatar

Some people are not deserving of our art or our love. We understand they were lessons. Thank you for this, love the painting too. Love, Virg

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

aw thanks virgina!!

<3

Val Killstar's avatar

“I’ll keep screaming if it keeps you away from me”

Loved this thank you for sharing

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

thanks for reading <3 i think that’s my favorite line

Val Killstar's avatar

Felt that subtitle

Lila Cave-Park's avatar

i almost called this ‘irony’ because it started by me declaring to myself i wouldn’t write it

Val Killstar's avatar

No its true

Not for you 🥀 not about you. For ME!!!