A lifetime of stiffness to unlearn 😭 ugh well said I love the themes here and rawness of phrasing.
Its almost like blunt while still being metaphorical?
I said this recently upon recieving nerve relaxers—- so wow I really was as uptight as I came off. It was a high to just drop my shoulders without a meditation. Bittersweet to realize I wasn’t just a lazy gal with bad posture.
Really loved the vivid imagery of the water & the almost wave like cadence of the entire piece -- definitely subbed! Would love to connect & support each other going forward. ♡
Wow, the emotions in this piece are so raw and powerful. It really makes you think about the connections we have with others and the impact we leave behind.
Really loved the vivid imagery of the water & the almost wave like cadence of the entire piece -- definitely subbed! Would love to connect & support each other going forward. ♡
This speaks to something so deeply, really leaves an impact and echoes of memory.
thank you!
A lifetime of stiffness to unlearn 😭 ugh well said I love the themes here and rawness of phrasing.
Its almost like blunt while still being metaphorical?
I said this recently upon recieving nerve relaxers—- so wow I really was as uptight as I came off. It was a high to just drop my shoulders without a meditation. Bittersweet to realize I wasn’t just a lazy gal with bad posture.
Oh yay! Just a lifetime of stiffness to unlearn.
Onward we go eh? 💘
thank you : ) yess i completely understand.
it’s all we can do, i suppose <3 <3
Also, the cadence overall feels like waves. Incredible work.
i’m excited it flowed in that way, thank you!
I reach out - where are you?
I wish for your touch, for a presence -
Look at me, finally, here.
But the only part of you I meet
is the one swimming through clouds of the ocean.
beautiful <3
Really loved the vivid imagery of the water & the almost wave like cadence of the entire piece -- definitely subbed! Would love to connect & support each other going forward. ♡
thank you! i will as well : )
Incredible use of water imagery, dragging, drying up, resisting, unmoving, releasing. Loved the voiceover and the familiar sounds in the background. 💕
thank you so much!!
Wow, the emotions in this piece are so raw and powerful. It really makes you think about the connections we have with others and the impact we leave behind.
thanks for reading ! <3
Keep writing and shining
Really loved the vivid imagery of the water & the almost wave like cadence of the entire piece -- definitely subbed! Would love to connect & support each other going forward. ♡